HI EVERYONE, today in writing we did a comic on PIXTON. It is about how to make a quality blog comment. This is a nice story to help you with your blog comments. Hope you enjoy it 👻
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Monday, June 29, 2020
7 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Kia ora An,
ReplyDeleteWow! This work knocks my socks off! You have explained how to write a quality comment in such a coherent way. This reminds me of all of the work I have done teaching students how to create a comment. To improve this post you could add some more information in your explanation around how to created it. I wonder what made you want to create this comic about comments in the first place?
Hopefully this comment meets your requirements!
- Miss Morgan
Thanks Miss Morgan, it was a really fun process.
ReplyDeleteKia ora An,
ReplyDeleteThis a very impressive cartoon that you have made. I could follow the conversation and it taught me about writing a quality blog comment. In my job I have to help students learn how to do this and it has given me a great idea how they could communicate their understanding. Did you find it a helpful process for your own learning?
Thank you for sharing this with the world,
Keep up the great learning and blogging,
:) Sharon - Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader
great I like it
ReplyDeleteyou done so good
ReplyDeletegood job
ReplyDeletegreat I like it good job you done so good
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