Pigeon Impossible
Pigeon Impossible
One day in Washington DC there was an agent named Walter Beckett. That day agent Beckett was holding a suitcase that looked normal but it wasn’t. Inside, there was a secret computer with buttons and a keyboard, but there was one most important button: it was a red one that could launch a rocket hidden in a tower.He was sitting on a bench and eating a bagel with his suitcase open and ready for work. As he was eating ,a pigeon came on the bench staring at the bagel with it’s beady little eyes,then the agent kindly pinched a little piece out of his bagel but the pigeon didn’t move. It wanted the whole bagel.After that, before agent Beckett knew it the pigeon started attacking him for the bagel. The agent then threw the bagel and the pigeon flew after it. But unluckily as it flew it accidently hooked its feet on the suitcase and got trapped in it. As Agent Beckett was about to open the suitcase the pigeon pushed the button that shoots lasers and the suitcase started shooting the agent. So then the agent hid behind a big pole to avoid the lasers. After a few minutes the pigeon got used to the buttons.
After attacking the city with the lasers and buttons. The pigeon reached the red button, then it pressed it. After that a rocket appeared from inside a big tower. And it launched...Agent Beckett saw from below and realized what had happened. The agent then waved the bagel in front of the suitcase and from inside the pigeon saw it. The agent then threw it in the air and when the pigeon wasn’t looking he pushed it away.After that, agent Beckett pressed a button to make him fly up (with the suitcase). Then he pressed a button to shoot the rocket, the rocket then exploded and agent Beckett flew down, unseen. And went back to his disguise as a normal man.
The end
Hi An
ReplyDeleteGood work getting your writing posted. Did you remember how to take a screenshot so you could add a picture to your post.
Is there a reason why the font changes half way through?
Mrs Jones
Hi An,
ReplyDeleteI love the way you have started using some really descriptive language at the beginning of your writing. I can 'feel' the story. "... pigeon came on the bench staring at the bagel with it’s beady little eyes, then the agent kindly pinched a little piece out of his bagel but the pigeon didn’t move."
You could try to use this language through your writing and start to use some short sentences for further effect. E.g., After the pigeon started attacking him for it. You might add, He scratched! He flapped his wings! He squawked!