I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, April 23, 2020
Writing - Teeth
Hi, today in writing I wrote about a short clip called Teeth.
It was nice, with 2 men who I named Fred and Matt.
But it was kind of hard, I had to find 2 old-men names.
: )
Teeth By: AN
One day, there were two old men named Matt and Fred. They were fishing on a lake. The lake that they were fishing in was a beautiful, peaceful and still lake. And they were rowing on their boat trying to find the perfect spot to fish.
As they were rowing Fred sneezed and his false teeth fell out into the lake and Matt laughed. When they found the right spot, they got their hooks and started fishing.
After a few minutes Matt caught a fish. He then, (to be silly) took his false teeth out and put it into the fish's mouth. Then, he showed Fred the fish. Fred laughed, took the teeth out and put it into his mouth. But the teeth didn’t fit and they both laughed. Then Fred threw it into the river. : )
The end
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Hi An. What a great story. I really liked your description of the lake. Well done.
ReplyDeleteMrs Fanning