I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, May 12, 2020
Writing - Dust Buddies
Once, in an old fashioned house there were 5 little dust buddies who were really hungry. They normally hung out in the living room where they would normally eat some cracker crumbs.
Two of the dust buddies were best of friends and loved playing with each other. But one of them normally got bullied so she wasn’t really social. Then the 2 dust buddies went to get some cracker crumbs for food.
But then a gang of bullies came and they bullied the shy little dust buddy. Her friend was telling her to come when and then they heard a vacuum coming. When they looked at the direction they saw that the house maid was coming for them.
The maid then came straight their way and she vacuumed them all up, but she missed one of them. The shy little dust buddy was left there alone, her only friend was in the vacuum and all the other dust buddies were there too.
So the dust Buddy smartly unplugged the vacuum cleaner and when the maid came to plug it in again she went into the vacuum and put her friends back together again.
But the dust buddy wasn’t done and she and her friend stood on the vacuum cleaner. Luring the maid into their trap. Then, they sucked the maid into the vacuum. Then they all threw her outside the door. After that the lonely and shy dust buddy had friends and was not bullied after that.
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